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Gem/Superb 4/5 - A high commendation for a well written and engaging fanfic. I highly recommend proofreading as i have noticed only slight improvement when it comes to the repeated gramm errors or you may try grammarly app. 5/5 - Non-canon compliant and 3Sanin/S. Hatake era. Your scribbles as well as plot changes you made to NarutoVerse schematics are well made which improved plot and stoey progression. It is also a plus since you have less to zero info dump. 5/5 - MC (AntiHero) is an SI reincarnate that has rich knowledge/experience in NarutoVerse as well as real life killings. MC was able to utilize his previous life experiences & foreknowledge of NinjaWorld. MC is a bit OP and has basic system with only acheivement rewards, all nature chakra, bloodline/chakra absorption & unlimited potential which were well placed and isnt abused as he trains his ass to the utmost without depending too much on his wishes. A chaotic-neutral persona which is apt for NarutoVerse. 4/5 - Update is a bit slow which is understandable as author-san has too many projects & focus more on quality over word count/quantity. 5/5 - Its a plus as author-san delves deeper into other villages other than konoha and bloodline explorations. Opinion: Avoid overlooking important plot changes and development to make it more entertaining and broaden the horizon of MC as well as avoid the regular plotholes and to always keep us on our toes.

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Becoming the strongest in the shinobi world

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