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Review Detail of CanemCaelesti999 in Hero? Pff— Don't Make Me Laugh

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Pro : The character design is realistic, the example is that how the MC was angered at his murderer, even if it's accidental. I like the way he react to Fantasia and how it's such a bull that people can just accept the expectation and treatment they receive in Fantasia. (PS : The MC is not A Simp} Con : I think, It's good, but it's boring. It's lacking the exposure and the description of the events that happen to the MC. It doesn't tell the reader on what exactly happen in each event and it's what making it boring. The lack of characters description and appearance is making it quite hard to visualize the event that happen and how, the char will react to it

Hero? Pff— Don't Make Me Laugh

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Thanks for the good review. I'll do my best to improve it next chapter and so on.