Review Detail of TheBestSeagull in Ace Of Terrans

So first of all, i cant say how the writing quality is in the later chapters because i just cant bring myself to continue to read. Now with that disclaimer out of the way, lets get to my thoughts about it: - The novel is one of the better ones in its genre. Its a pretty original idea (at least as i can asses that) and its not too rushed. - IT NEEDS EDITING! The reason i cant bring myself to continue to read this is, that some sentences just do not make any sense at all or just arent finished. its sometimes almost as if the novel is just a mediocre MTL... so please Author please edit tgis novel. Maybe most of my issues are fixed if you just run this all through grammarly once, but PLEASE fix them grammar errors!