Review Detail of Communist_lemur in Ace Of Terrans

Item: Ace Of Terrans
Rating: 3.8

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Communist_lemurLv42yrCommunist_lemur

This is a very nice take on reincarnation and has great potential but it reads like a badly google translated book. An example of this is in the second chapter where the mc was late and said the time is 8:00 apology for the delay in seconds. Which turned me away from the story.

Ace Of Terrans

THE_WORDSMITH

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Communist_lemurLv4Communist_lemur

Sure, a better version would be “sorry for being late Miss Rosa, a girl pushed me and I couldn’t get to the train in time.

THE_WORDSMITH:I apologize. I will edit that. Can you help me with what a proper version of this would be?

2yr

THE_WORDSMITHAuthorTHE_WORDSMITH

I apologize. I will edit that. Can you help me with what a proper version of this would be?

2yr