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If ever there was a story that a too rushed. This is it. Some novel rush the ending, so novel rush certain arcs. This one rushed the entire novel from the beginning to the very end. The entire story, excluding the ending time skip, occurred over a span of 2 years. So the MC took a little over a year and a half to reach the highest realm. A realm no one had reached prior in their entire life! Yes, the cheat he had was pretty OP to begin with, but the author does not let a moment pass before a new arc has already begun. It’s usually a span of half a month to a full month of gap between each arcs. No other characters get any importance or time to progress except the MC, that is until the last arc where they decide to give a little bit of improvement to a female side character. But even still she doesn’t play much of a role as by the time she does anything, the arc needs to be concluded and the next arc needs to begin. And in this while, the author also needs to show tue MC’s development. It was just chaos after chaos in the universe. Moving on from this, comes the point that this is a Chinese novel. So yes, the nationalism is pretty heavy and frankly too unreasonable. For example, every other organisation has good and bad people in it, while china or what they call “Construction Division” has only good people. Only this organisation is trying to make efforts to bring humanity back from the post apocalyptic times and back to its peak. And every other organisation is just trying to suppress them. Well, everyone except the “The Arctic Army”, *cough*Russia*cough*. They would team up with the other organisations in every single arc, and suppress China & Russia, only to be beaten back by China who would be well aware of the plot of these organisations because of the existence of the MC. Even the major plot reveal of the last arc was too bland. Took about a quarter of a chapter for the reveal! Soemthing that kept coming up throughout the entire novel was just done and dusted in a handful of paragraphs. Anyway. Could’ve done well, but yeah.🤷🏻‍♂️

I Have 10 Training Avatars

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