Review Detail of bobarella_1234 in Reincarnated at Level Two Million

I like the writing style, it's good and it has relatively good grammar and punctuation. the problem is you're trying to mix a character who is overpowered and a character who has no power and acting like they would make the same decision and mistakes. But what really gave me a problem was how complicated you made it so early on. It felt like you were trying to make the book one of those really big worlds that are really complicated without putting in the effort to write hundreds or even a thousand chapters. I think this story has great potential, but you need to think about your spacing and the type of character you want.