Review Detail of It_Is_Me_Ttt in Reincarnated at Level Two Million

What can I say.... Lvl 2mil is an interesting concept. The premise of the story started out well in the first 3 chapters but soon started to degrade. The book has a lot of potential but the foundation got destroyed due to unnecessary and inconsistent story added here and there. It will be really hard to fix all that. I wanted to give it more time but now at chp 21, I pretty much give up. Here is what I have to say that may or may bot have helped; If you want him to explore the world, simply have him do so, he has the power. If you say he needs an identity and you really want to add that adventurer them, you dont need to make complicated routes that will destroy your story. Just make him perform a test in the guild base and show that 1% or more of his power tonget the highest rank possible. Besides, the identity of a duke son + and adventurer would have been really good if you worked on that. Next is the planning of characters, I belive when writing, hou should try as best as you can to write from a character's perspective. For example, we had him as 10yrs and his sister as 5yrs. Even if you say they are Reincarnates, what about the parent? Try to look from their perspective, would a parent allow their kids as such age to do such crazy quest (I mean at around chp 10+)? Regardless how smart they are, it will never happen except the parent dont care about their kids. Next is that there are too many inconsistencies in just chp 4 to 21 that I can begin to say 1 at a time. It was really annoying and frustrating reading it. But everyone starts from someone, at least you got the experience now, and I hope the next book will be better. Another is the exaggerated level, you never gave us a detail of how stats works which made the numbers meaningless and less impactful. We dont have a gell if what they are capable of. We see Rose at level 15 able to punch a low rank adventurer (should be almost similar levels) across the stage. With that in mind, it's appropriate for one over 2000x that level to destroy a city easily. But we have such people in dozens among demigod races and demons and yet they are less superior to humans who peak at lvl 40. And the fact that you already put a restriction on human level using the goddess statement is what started all these inconsistencies. the best would have been to not limit yourself and put the story in a dead end with no way out than to say humans oppressed other races with their puny level, while having the said races with level over a 1000. At average lvl 15 -40. Most of all these inconsistencies will be avoided if you keep to each character's trait, try to write from their perspective as best as you can, and plan things out thoroughly. Sometimes, you may even want to crosscheck because what may make sense to you wouldn't make sense to the readers.. Anyway, thank you. That's all I have to say.