Review Detail of Helldragon_xd in Reincarnated at Level Two Million

Alright, so here comes the full review. I finished all of the free chapters and even used a fast pass for an extra one lol. I realy liked your premise and character progression. In the start, everything was smooth to read and I enjoyed how realistic the approaches were. Then again, this also ties in to some flaws I want to discuss within your novel. After rebirth, I enjoyed all of the characters established. The father, the mother, and the sister were all multidimensional characters with their own personalities and motives. You have the power-hungry king, and a kingdom where the humans hate the non-humans. All of this setting established is fantastic, yet I feel like much potential was seemingly lost due to super fast plot progression. First would be the arranged marriage the parents had. Why did it occur? Was there any special meaning behind it that caused the mother to give up her own hopes and dreams. I wished for more plot exploration and give us more details on the parents. How were they able to produce the MC and Rose, both super op children when their talents seemed quite normal? If this is explored later in the premium chapters then I apologize, but I had gripes of the time skip and suddenly the father died with nothing more on the parents. This felt like rather wasteful for me. The second would be the interactions between Rose and the MC. Aside from being condenscending and prideful, I wish you could make her more similar like Daida from Ranking of Kings, and give her so much more depth and complexity. Maybe she loves her brother, and the reason she's so prideful and seemingly mean was because she wishes to protect him because she loves him so much, and then you can do the big reveal on who she really is after to have much more impact. Having her suddenly turn evil suddenly turns her into somewhat of a stock villain. The Hero Queen reference to fire emblem I also noticed, but I wish Rose was simply much more than “Oh, I'm actually evil and a tyrant" kind of character. Maybe after her parents died so she turned like this would make more sense, but again, I feel like a lot of plot potential within the kingdom had been lost. Then of course, the Red Dragon God suddenly being killed by MC and then he had to be exiled. The problem here for me was mostly how the school life felt super rushed. No progression about mc learning more stuff, aside from just having a higher level. Maybe a tournament? Making human friends? A lot of your typical school themes that could be explored seemed wasted. The protagonist could learn more skills and more about the world around him within the school, and then after exploring his family as well as his relationships, he could be exiled and we have that time skip. Aside from those gripes, I love the demon lord's actual character. Isekai vs isekai is not used enough, and it disappoints me. Nothing like op mc vs op villain, so I wished that you could've made the demon lord stronger in some way too. (Maybe like garou from OPM?) Having some sort of leveling system and giving 2 contrasting characters their time to shine creates a lot of hype, and that's something you could possibly think on. Then there's the MC going back to the real world after killing Steve. I wished you could've done more with those gods, and create more dramatic effect. Aside from being prideful and jerks, and somewhat evil, there's not really anything else about the gods aside from the mc able to one-shot both. This felt like another area where character progression and plot were lacking for me personally. Anyways, those were the suggestions I have for the book. Everything else I enjoyed, the skills, the powers, the main god and eddy who were written well and characters with depth. However, I was kinda disappointed with Rose and the parents though, as well as the introduction of the other gods who were antagonistic forces for character progression, like Steve.