Over all the Storys seems to be well thought out and so far the author has shown a kinda scary level of focus on his novel and the writing has even given me goosebumps at times my only problem I can see with it that their is open holes in the story but I trust this author enough to clear up anything as they seem dedicated and thoughtful enough to have envisioned what they want this world to look like
Twilight_Lord
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LIKEThank you for your feedback but I would like to say that this is compared to other novels on this site as well as the fact that this is his first novel that he has written and he is also new to the English Language as such he did a good job with all these things hindering him.
Havency_Taylor:You and I did not read the same story at all. That or this is the first novel you’ve read outside of childrens nursery rhymes.