At present I feel this work has good grammer and exceptional writing, considering the pool of subpar novels i have seen on this platform. Worldbuilding: Nicely done with subtle introduction of information in a well paced manner, that is what i take from it, do keep in mind i have only read 8 chapters but these 8 were enough to hook me to my phone to ask for more. To the Author, Write this story at your own pace and do not force yourself.
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