Review Detail of Dao_of_Rebirth in the magnificent bearer of the peculiar book
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the story is nice but it seems to jump in places, causing the story to seem choppy. and what are even the dolls and if you explain the purpose of events it might help it flow easier
the magnificent bearer of the peculiar book
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Thanks for your comment, I am trying to bring more content in the shortest time possible so I may have to rewrite some parts for better understanding, I will make an improved version of the first three chapters in the initial volume after bringing the first episode of volume two , so I will improve those chapters that I already have and I will try to bring a better understanding in the next arcs.
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