Dude so far the story is interesting. It is very well made and I like the fact that you tried to give the characters their own feelings and emotions while also keeping the story interesting(Although it is only chapter 2). This enables me to give both the writing quality and character design a 5, my only issue being that the main character hasn't been fleshed out enough(what is his motives, why does he do anything he does). This is only chapter 2 so I hope you do show that. I really hope it stays at this level because right now it is top tier for me. It could possibly be one of my upcoming favorites.
Henosis
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