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Item: Apocalypse:come back
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Bob_Uchiha_XDLv42yrBob_Uchiha_XD

So... we have a male MC. MC is called Jade. A 0% masculine name for an Apocalyptic story. A world that is not yet described, therefore a bit confusing. It would be great if there was a chapter explaining where the MC is.Details that help understand... a tab: World and date. Country, city, place.

Apocalypse:come back

Mana_Jimoh

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Mana_JimohAuthorMana_Jimoh

and sorry this is my first time writing something like this, I will try harder to make less errors. thank you.

2yr

Mana_JimohAuthorMana_Jimoh

okay I will try my best. if you want to add a character or scene let me know, I will Lend you a ear. thanks for you suggestions.

2yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

AUTHOR, You can make an auxiliary chapter, to give details of the characters and the world. For example: - Male main character - Oldyears - Physical features - Occupation: student, driver. Single married. Luck!

Mana_Jimoh:and sorry this is my first time writing something like this, I will try harder to make less errors. thank you.

2yr

adeadlegendLv10adeadlegend

It sounds strong to me. Like a blade.

1yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

GAY

adeadlegend:It sounds strong to me. Like a blade.

1yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

You should write about 50 chapters, then post 1 chapter per day for 20 days straight.

Mana_Jimoh:okay I will try my best. if you want to add a character or scene let me know, I will Lend you a ear. thanks for you suggestions.

1yr