Review Detail of Xela_Stone in The Forgotten Ability

Author Review: Let me start off with saying that I am slightly biased since this is my story, but I believe that every author is to a certain extent. Now on to the review. For the writing quality I am a new author and this is my first time writing a book of this sort so while I believe that it is pretty good I almost guarantee that there will be at least a few errors. That being said I read every comment so if you see an error please point it out, so I can fix it as quick as possible. For the stability of updates, I am publishing 1 chapter a day, which I plan on continuing for the foreseeable future. For the story development, this may be a weak part of my writing. I am taking quite a bit of time going into detail on many sections, which slows down the story quite a bit. If you are not looking for that in a book, I completely understand. Lastly, the world building. I believe I do a pretty good job with the world building. This causes the story to slow down quite a bit, but I believe that it is a good tradeoff. I hope you enjoy the story. :)