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Review Detail of Megamind2 in Invincible's: SUPERMAN

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Megamind2
Megamind2Lv112yrMegamind2

it is a good story with huge potential but ppl will back me on this it is too fast paced ridled with spelling errors and plot holes. if those things weren't there it would be a perfect 5

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Invincible's: SUPERMAN

Thomas_Hodge

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Megamind2
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also while it is a fanfic chracter interactions need to be more realistic. there is no way that cecil did not put a tracker on mc right after meeting him

Thomas_Hodge
Thomas_HodgeAuthorThomas_Hodge

I've noticed my misspelling A lot of the time I spend hours rewriting these chapters so there are times when they slip through and I am sorry for that, I also noticed how fast paced I slammed through some of the original material. I plan on starting an entire arc based solely on clark, anissa, kregg, Lucan, and thula so that I build on them betraying thragg for superman. I assure you when I do start that arc things are going to slow down. And when invincible disappears for those years I plan on taking an event from the comics that will change how this story plays out. until then please continue to show your support and as always any further feed back and criticism will very much be appreciated.

Megamind2:also while it is a fanfic chracter interactions need to be more realistic. there is no way that cecil did not put a tracker on mc right after meeting him