Review Detail of NotGivinUp in Naruto: Reborn With a System!

I loved the story, great character design, not like i know what that is but my point its i loved the main character, Writing quality was ok. Updates? the story is done, while i prefer longer stories it ended on a sweet note. development is there for sure but it was a bit fast for my taste. Background, disappointed me there was little to no info on who the main character was interested in romantically. Granted there was a few times the story didn't just hover of the MC. Over all good, but for your next story, work on that background, thank you for the story.