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Naruto: Reborn With a System!
Nutella_
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I couldn't tell you an exact number. I only had the first 2 chapters already written before publishing the novel. But I have some ideas for the Chuunin exams, so ... I think many?
TheVeteranReader:how many chapter are you going to post here? I am going to add this according to your answer.
It is highly unlikely that there will be adult content in this fanfic and I am still debating if there will be Romance.
pervy_sloth:can you try to make the mc not a simple or a pervert I'm tired of all these fanfics where the only thing on mc's mind is s*x
Man, harem is hard to write. You can't write it properly. You must advence plot according to a plan. Ä°f you don't have any ideas, you can't ask us.
Nutella_:It is highly unlikely that there will be adult content in this fanfic and I am still debating if there will be Romance.
TheVeteranReader:Man, harem is hard to write. You can't write it properly. You must advence plot according to a plan. Ä°f you don't have any ideas, you can't ask us.
Does this mean the mc can kill people or is he the righteous hero of justice that canât even kill a mouse but dies cause of stupidity and betrayal and what not...? Btw I recommend not doing a harem unless you want a complicated story that isnât wirth it but I saw that you donât want to do it anyway and since youâre thinking about romance Iâd say only making an option for it in the story like you have the possibility to make that girl the mcs girlfriend but it doesnât mean she will be his girlfriend so you donât completely block all paths for romance but just leave the option there for the later chapters. (I always hated romance when it came at the early chapters cause it just made me cringe too much and I think the early chapters are there to concentrate on the mc and bot someone else...)
Nutella_:Maybe? For now, the MC will only seek to be strong.
Ghost_Playing:Does this mean the mc can kill people or is he the righteous hero of justice that canât even kill a mouse but dies cause of stupidity and betrayal and what not...? Btw I recommend not doing a harem unless you want a complicated story that isnât wirth it but I saw that you donât want to do it anyway and since youâre thinking about romance Iâd say only making an option for it in the story like you have the possibility to make that girl the mcs girlfriend but it doesnât mean she will be his girlfriend so you donât completely block all paths for romance but just leave the option there for the later chapters. (I always hated romance when it came at the early chapters cause it just made me cringe too much and I think the early chapters are there to concentrate on the mc and bot someone else...)
Ghost_Playing:Btw author will he have a bloodline later on?? Y'now that tasty OP Senju bloodline over there in the corner of your brain đ§ just waiting to be unlocked of the prison it is in?
If you have no plans on romance with any character then i recommend kaguya. You can shape her easily to how you like since she is the quiet type.
Nutella_:It is highly unlikely that there will be adult content in this fanfic and I am still debating if there will be Romance.
Nutella_:I couldn't tell you an exact number. I only had the first 2 chapters already written before publishing the novel. But I have some ideas for the Chuunin exams, so ... I think many?image