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Wtf is the use of saying would the mc would be a hero or villian with the pressure he received in the synopsis when he was so adamant on being a hero from the start to the end even after being bullied and hated against. There was not a single thought of revenge/anger or anything if i rmbr.

MHA: The Symbiote Hero

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I have a plan and have been meaning to go back and rewrite some of the previous chapters but kinda lazy. I will probably go back in and change it in a couple of days

xlvlx:Sure but if u plan on making a villian mc u might want to change the early chps as from how unwavering his character was the only thing i can think of to make mc become a villian is by his parent’s death.
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Totally understandable, I will admit that it does start off pretty ruff since this is my first time writing and i personally dont like how it started but i promise it does get better onwards

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Sure but if u plan on making a villian mc u might want to change the early chps as from how unwavering his character was the only thing i can think of to make mc become a villian is by his parent’s death.

BBQ_Sauce:Totally understandable, I will admit that it does start off pretty ruff since this is my first time writing and i personally dont like how it started but i promise it does get better onwards