Review Detail of MWse in SEDUCING TRENT VANDERWOOD

The writing quality isn't bad. But the mistake I've noticed in several places is that you use punctuation (,) at the end of many dialogues instead of (./!/?). Or you forget to put (?) when someone asks something. Another mistake(not necessarily grammar) is that you leave too often blank spaces between your phrases. It's ok to leave a blank space from time to time, for example between 2 people's dialogue or spread a description in multiple smaller pieces; but leaving a blank space between every one or two phrases of a few words is a hard no! I didn't read the whole story so I'll give 5* to Story Development. As well as for character design, in the parts that I read, I didn't see anything that told me about the characters, so I leave it 4*. The world background is almost nonexistent, In every chapter should be an amount of description which says where are the characters, how is the weather, is it cold/warm, the senses of smell/sight/hearing etc. In the last two chapters, I saw only dialogue with not enough information about where the action happens. I hope this review will be helpful!