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Review Detail of Michael_v1 in Bro, I'm not an Undead!

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Michael_v1
Michael_v1Lv62yrMichael_v1

For a first time system novel it's written really well. The system screens are nice and easy to read. It's not a dark themed novel and very similar to various litrpg stories. I think the humor is great and the first 20 chapters definitely have some interesting moments and characters. World building-wise it's still a bit slow. However the pacing is not hurried so you get to take the time to understand the leveling system and information about the enemies before each fight. The title is a pretty good synopsis of the story and it's a very leisurely read.

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Bro, I'm not an Undead!

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HelValkyrja
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Hi, I would appreciate it if you check out my new novel ABOMINATION, really value the support and critiques. The first three chapters set itšŸ¤© so give it a try and let me know.