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Review Detail of DarkDaemon in The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?

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DarkDaemon
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As much i love this novel I’m going to drop it Author, honestly yang su’s character gets annoying as the chapters progresses and i dislike him at this point and constantly trying to give yang su the unnecessary cultivation protagonist plot while make the other non existent is just wrong it feels like you’re forcing us to have interest in him which is just not the move honestly everytime he gets mentioned or he shows up i just feel annoyed by him Secondly, mcs makes weird decisions that makes me question him but it’s all for character development i guess Honestly the main reason I’m dropping this is yang su and his constant dramas and the overall plot Somethings missing in the plot that makes it feel incomplete and hard to be invested in I’m really sorry for dropping this book but i just can’t wrap my head around some things happening in the novel especially yang su Top tier providence made the side characters more interesting because of their story and journey not because they were constantly shoved in front of our face to like them.

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The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?

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imjustthtguy
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Truly thankful you mentions this I was looking for comments about how this books progression was going to be after the first 100 and this decided it thank you!

Ghost_Playing:I currently can’t bring myself to read past chapter 364 (the mc being gone plot is just too annoying for me since many cultivation novels like to use it as a "fresh restart” to introduce new things which you did as well)
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Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

Ah, kk, I understand, it's not easy seeing a decision being made and then waiting for the explanation tens of chapters after. Thou mind telling me how far you've gotten?

DarkDaemon
DarkDaemonLv3DarkDaemon

I stopped at chapter 244 cause I really really really want to love the novel cause the potential it has is scaring just thinking of

Tsetth:Ah, kk, I understand, it's not easy seeing a decision being made and then waiting for the explanation tens of chapters after. Thou mind telling me how far you've gotten?
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

wow, you read that far? Thanks for reading, and this changes everything.. so you still find yang su in particular annoying even after the village arc and li shen's reason for giving him a do foundation🤔... It wasn't my intention to push the agend of a main character onto him but instead highlight his importance in the future because of his bloodline...as of recent chapters I'd say i focus more on Mu Fan and Jun then anyone of the group asides Li Shen🤔

DarkDaemon:I stopped at chapter 244 cause I really really really want to love the novel cause the potential it has is scaring just thinking of
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

lol, i read it before you deleted it and you really underestimate how much a hate doing something that's already been done, my skin crawls everytime I see myself going down a plotline I've seen before...i might use a troupe to set up a scenario but the finishing product won't be the same as other ihave personally read, or at least ill try adding my own spin on it...i think your worries are warranted because of how I set it up, and thou I can't promise that scanario never happening but believe in my anti-cliche mindset that it'll be different from what you've seen before!!

DarkDaemon
DarkDaemonLv3DarkDaemon

Honestly speaking the fact that you make time to answer my complaints is a +1 in my book not a lot of authors do that thank you And I’ll keep reading to see how you’re going to tackle that plot in the future but it was really nice of you to make time to listen to my rants thanks!

Tsetth:lol, i read it before you deleted it and you really underestimate how much a hate doing something that's already been done, my skin crawls everytime I see myself going down a plotline I've seen before...i might use a troupe to set up a scenario but the finishing product won't be the same as other ihave personally read, or at least ill try adding my own spin on it...i think your worries are warranted because of how I set it up, and thou I can't promise that scanario never happening but believe in my anti-cliche mindset that it'll be different from what you've seen before!!
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

haha, np, I welcome my readers' rants because I'm only one person with one perspective, but if I listen to all of yours it will widen mine and my ideas, thus allowing me to piece together an awesome story, so I listen and listen closely...

DarkDaemon:Honestly speaking the fact that you make time to answer my complaints is a +1 in my book not a lot of authors do that thank you And I’ll keep reading to see how you’re going to tackle that plot in the future but it was really nice of you to make time to listen to my rants thanks!
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

hmm, didn't wanna ask this as it isn't appropriate for an author to do, but couldn't help my curiosity...you seemed to not like the book as much as your three stars say, is there something else that might have pushed it down to that score🤔

DarkDaemon
DarkDaemonLv3DarkDaemon

1,The cultivation realms especially the four physical realms it’s confusing atimes especially now where the mc can fight far above his current qi cultivation realm i always forget which comes before which and which is ahead of while because its a new cultivation system so it makes it confusing atimes to keep track of all the realms of cultivators around the mc and the mc himself 2, not really a fault but li shen’s ‘kidnapping’ or should we say way of recruiting is kind of forceful but it does add a bit of comedy to it but it does get weird atimes when he gives people no choice but to join the faction against their will but i guess that’s where his sin of greed comes into play 3, mc is kind of a narcissist the way he constantly calls himself the greatest genius is cringe atimes we know he’s a pivoter but him constantly saying it in almost every chapter it just him sound like a villain i mean he does have the right to call himself the greatest genius but hearing it everytime or during random scenes reduces my immersion 4, not really a fault but i just find it weird the amount of male to female ratio in the world it feels like it is 95% males and 4.99% females cause apart from ling xia and recently lihua there’s hardly any other female that really stands out from the plot Even his faction when mc’s recruiting it does feel like he’s starting a boy band lol

Tsetth:hmm, didn't wanna ask this as it isn't appropriate for an author to do, but couldn't help my curiosity...you seemed to not like the book as much as your three stars say, is there something else that might have pushed it down to that score🤔
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

hm, thanks for this, I'll make sure to correct or improve these aspects...

DarkDaemon:1,The cultivation realms especially the four physical realms it’s confusing atimes especially now where the mc can fight far above his current qi cultivation realm i always forget which comes before which and which is ahead of while because its a new cultivation system so it makes it confusing atimes to keep track of all the realms of cultivators around the mc and the mc himself 2, not really a fault but li shen’s ‘kidnapping’ or should we say way of recruiting is kind of forceful but it does add a bit of comedy to it but it does get weird atimes when he gives people no choice but to join the faction against their will but i guess that’s where his sin of greed comes into play 3, mc is kind of a narcissist the way he constantly calls himself the greatest genius is cringe atimes we know he’s a pivoter but him constantly saying it in almost every chapter it just him sound like a villain i mean he does have the right to call himself the greatest genius but hearing it everytime or during random scenes reduces my immersion 4, not really a fault but i just find it weird the amount of male to female ratio in the world it feels like it is 95% males and 4.99% females cause apart from ling xia and recently lihua there’s hardly any other female that really stands out from the plot Even his faction when mc’s recruiting it does feel like he’s starting a boy band lol
DarkDaemon
DarkDaemonLv3DarkDaemon

I’ll leave anothee review after I catch up to the current chapters or after another 100 cause 3stars is kind of unfair

Tsetth:hm, thanks for this, I'll make sure to correct or improve these aspects...
Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14Ghost_Playing

I currently can’t bring myself to read past chapter 364 (the mc being gone plot is just too annoying for me since many cultivation novels like to use it as a "fresh restart” to introduce new things which you did as well)

Tsetth:Ah, kk, I understand, it's not easy seeing a decision being made and then waiting for the explanation tens of chapters after. Thou mind telling me how far you've gotten?
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

It's not really a fresh start, and thou new characters are introduced the whole southern border arc is heavily related to Li Shen and the future of the book...I knew a lot of readers wouldn't like this route but the payoff will be worth it if you find a bit of enjoyment until he returns...and he has in the recent chaps...

Ghost_Playing:I currently can’t bring myself to read past chapter 364 (the mc being gone plot is just too annoying for me since many cultivation novels like to use it as a "fresh restart” to introduce new things which you did as well)
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