On one hand, the very basic if understandable grammar is a bit of take away but on the other hand Alice is the best girl and I was very upset to have read till the current (chap 24). I 100% shamelessly demand more. MOAR
Alekzi
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I don't think grammar needs to be super complex to be good story, and I like more simple, which is not tiring to read, and everyone can understand.
But I am glad that you like the story