Review Detail of SATRAI in Ghost Rider in Twilight
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I don't understand why this fanfic has so many positive reviews. It's similar to other Twilight fanfics by other writers on webnovel. I was interested in it at first. I was hoping the hero lived originally in the Twilight world. When you read the first chapter you can think of that. But then the author moved him to the Twilight world from our world and I got immediately bored reading. The piece had potential but now it's dead.
Ghost Rider in Twilight
Alekzi
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I'm not a bot, many authors use the same techniques in their writing. Gods give 3 wishes, send them to another world. The hero knows the canon well. In twilight everyone uses vampire pairs and so on. The world building is primitive. It makes you very tired, all fanfics on webnovel are similar to each other. I get what you wanted to write about the ghost racer. I understand that Twilight and Marvel are different worlds. But it's a fanfic, you can make up anything you want. For example. Vampires for treasure destroyed the tomb and released a vengeful spirit. A ghost possesses a guy in this world and kills a burglar. He was frightened of the power, so to avoid hurting his loved ones he fled to Forks. (all men are sinners). More can be made up from there.
Alekzi:Imo it would feel so weird if Jack actually lived in twilight world, and somehow have powers of ghost rider. I mean twilight world has nothing to do with marvel, so I decided that Jack was born in different world instead, and since your review is similar to spam review. You gave 1 star and it would mean everything is bad, like grammar, update stability, character, etc. So this review is similar to bot spamming 1 star review, so I will delete this, if you don't like the story, at least give proper reasoning, and accuse that I have bad grammar or something, and not because you think one thing is bad and then it deserves 1 star. get gud
Imo it would feel so weird if Jack actually lived in twilight world, and somehow have powers of ghost rider. I mean twilight world has nothing to do with marvel, so I decided that Jack was born in different world instead, and since your review is similar to spam review. You gave 1 star and it would mean everything is bad, like grammar, update stability, character, etc. So this review is similar to bot spamming 1 star review, so I will delete this, if you don't like the story, at least give proper reasoning, and accuse that I have bad grammar or something, and not because you think one thing is bad and then it deserves 1 star. get gud