I've seen a lot of people commenting about how "forced" the romance is and to that I say... Try reading any other twilight fic, they are literally just as forced if not even more, and while there are quite a few spelling mistakes and relatively lazy moments "like 'u' instead of 'you'." but overall it's really not bad.
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