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To be honest, the story was a total disappointment. It started off ok, nothing really special, but it was ok, the bad thing is the most pathetic and forced romance I've ever seen, and over all crepuscle cliche, the MC just comes into the world, tries his powers and bonds with the blonde girl, by force and the MC didn't even care, the bond comes and the MC says he wants to get away, he wants freedom, so he was doing his own thing for a year, then comes the problems that the blonde's family has problems and the MC feels that, blah blah, in the end the MC saves her and falls totally in love with her because of the bond, which ironically makes him a slave to love and the bond, really disappointing, mostly because it seems that no one who does crepusculo fanfic tries to do something new or different, it's all bonding, bonding, and more bonding.
Enjoying life in twilight
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The MC already decided he was going to go to his bond and just waited to do so. His character didn’t change it just adapted it’s not like his simping for his mate and what do you actually expect him to do. He already had feelings for her plus it’s not like his mate doesn’t give in the relationship either. It’s still early on as well so I don’t think calling him a slave based on a couple choices is logical. In the end it’s all about what type of novel your looking for, this just isn’t for you. 👍👍👍
JokesOnYou:The MC already decided he was going to go to his bond and just waited to do so. His character didn’t change it just adapted it’s not like his simping for his mate and what do you actually expect him to do. He already had feelings for her plus it’s not like his mate doesn’t give in the relationship either. It’s still early on as well so I don’t think calling him a slave based on a couple choices is logical. In the end it’s all about what type of novel your looking for, this just isn’t for you. 👍👍👍
