Review Detail of J_Titan in Multiverse of Marvel

Item: Multiverse of Marvel
Rating: 5

Review detail

J_TitanLv32yrJ_Titan

As a newbie author with protentional to learn, I will give you straight 5 stars. Just couple of suggestions. 1. Don't make MC too OP. Believe me, it would be good at first but it will become hard to connect the MC to storyline. 2. It would be better if he could only summon the power and not characters. Letting your summon do the work may sound good at first but it disconnects MC with story.

Multiverse of Marvel

thelightedghost

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Replies4

Bly999Lv15Bly999

I do agree with making him to op but I like the fact he can summon them as I find it refreshing there is profit like a good 20+ were they just get the power instead it's nice to see the character as well and see what happens when they are also there

2yr

Taimur_AliLv4Taimur_Ali

The mc is turning out to be weak. And gives away power like it's nothing . Having him have only powers and items from his created stories would have been better. Its crossover disguise as an isekai.

2yr

thelightedghostAuthorthelightedghost

Aren't there so many novels with such settings. You can read them instead

Taimur_Ali:The mc is turning out to be weak. And gives away power like it's nothing . Having him have only powers and items from his created stories would have been better. Its crossover disguise as an isekai.

2yr

MrJustLv4MrJust

OP Mc fan-fic can also be good, If i was to name one, Grandpa Universe as example

2yr