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Review Detail of Fernizer in One Piece: Jar Merchant: Nami hits the eighth level at the start

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Fernizer
FernizerLv132yrFernizer

Well... if you want to read some mtl'ed novel, then it's for you. Except it isn't actually site for mtl. Author didn't even change "names" (weird things like Sauron instead of Zoro, Karp instead of Garp... and it's just in synopsis) to actual names. It looks like simple copy&paste. It's just as hard to read as your usual mtl. But it isn't mtl site. If author told something about it being mtl, did some work on this editing some names and gramar. Just made it a bit more radable, then I would rate it normally. But now? 1/5 is too much.

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One Piece: Jar Merchant: Nami hits the eighth level at the start

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Crazy_Team
Crazy_TeamLv1Crazy_Team

if you actually care about grammer when commenting that just tells me you are socially awkward and a loner because who the fuck care what people on the internet gonna say about your grammer and besides your grammer isnt that bright either so......

AghoraRudra:you grammer ain't very bright to ridicule others its readable not radable
AghoraRudra
AghoraRudraLv10AghoraRudra

you grammer ain't very bright to ridicule others its readable not radable

Chaudhary_Kaif
Chaudhary_KaifLv1Chaudhary_Kaif

we can still understand him tho and he is writing a review not some friggin novel

AghoraRudra:you grammer ain't very bright to ridicule others its readable not radable
acasualreader
acasualreaderLv4acasualreader

Not to mention begging for money multiple time each chapter. But the most annoying part is probably how much help he gives to the villains. The mc watched as his "guest" was robbed and attacked in his shop bc she was pretty. Interesting concept but who wants to help the evil characters while snubbing decent ones. good luck

sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4sagepotatoOAA

atleast it ain't mtl like the novel and everyone sometimes make errors

AghoraRudra:you grammer ain't very bright to ridicule others its readable not radable