Review Detail of Venusean in Revelations @end of the world

The writing was good, albeit with some small, but noticeable grammar errors and awkward syntax(Grammarly helps for those.). The story, characters, and the world, all seem to be developing quite nicely into a story that has a focus on some sci-fi elements and fantasy ones, a combination that a lot of people are bound to like. Plot is also not messy or jumbled up, and instead, concise and simple to understand. Good work.