I just gave this a 4 star because from what I briefly read it has a good grammar. there was no point in revealing that he is from the future like at all. I just read until he said that and I automatically dropped because I don’t like seeing stupid stuff like that. Also from the other review I read it said that he revealed multiple times that he is from the future so it’s a automatic drop for me but if you like mcs revealing they’re from the future then this is your cup of tea.
okmangeez01
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LIKEYou know I actually didn't like that part much either but I kept on and generally enjoyed it for a bit until I got depressed that he probably wasn't gonna live that long anyway and stopped reading lol. I would give it a shot and just try to gloss over that part, you might enjoy an 'America done right' kinda story.