Review Detail of Gin_Stroke in Omicron Tales: Adventures Across Space

Here is "MY" opinion Interesting story. There are definitely not many out there with their own unique world design. Action. Action scenes start appearing pretty early which I liked very much. Grammar. It was good at the beginning but got a bit worse later on. Might be cause you have time to edit them yet which is understandable. I saw randomly capitalized words frequently. (Or Is it a way to focus on some words? ) Characters. Thoughts of characters are explained nicely but lacked emotions. The conversations are to direct. However, the conversations later on are much better so it could be that I was too quick to judge. Additional. Some stuff are not explained. Though some are common concepts but since it is a different story you can clarify them in auxiliary chapters.