Badly written, I know this is a wish fulfilment and all but it's honestly boring and there's a lot of wrong information about the COTE. I am even doubting if you really read the LN or just didn't bother to understand the characters. Keep doing what you're doing and I hope you improve your writing.
IOnlyReadNTRHentai
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LIKELeylin_123:mis respeto por fijar este comentario. soy sincero y dire que antes de leer una novela/fan fic, o cualquier otro trabajo yo lo primero que busco es leer todas las reseñas malas y criticas que den mala opinion, las leo y considero si son creibles, si tienen logica lo que dicen y luego leo los primeros capitulos para decidir si seguir definitivamente el trabajo o lo dejo caer.
I won't lie writing with good grammar is necessary if you write a fic. You could use grammarly or other similar websites to help you.
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:Really? I know there is a lot of OG information but which parts are wrong information though? I believe that I didn't put wrong information. Yeah, I stopped reading 2ndVol1 and it has been a long time I read the LN. The fanfic is not even started and I know my writing is trash.
MagnuS:I won't lie writing with good grammar is necessary if you write a fic. You could use grammarly or other similar websites to help you.
Then you should probably get a friend who's native language is English or at least is good at it to proofread it for you. Or you could do it yourself
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:Well, I use Grammarly and not a premium version but I indeed use it.
MagnuS:Then you should probably get a friend who's native language is English or at least is good at it to proofread it for you. Or you could do it yourself
mis respeto por fijar este comentario. soy sincero y dire que antes de leer una novela/fan fic, o cualquier otro trabajo yo lo primero que busco es leer todas las reseñas malas y criticas que den mala opinion, las leo y considero si son creibles, si tienen logica lo que dicen y luego leo los primeros capitulos para decidir si seguir definitivamente el trabajo o lo dejo caer.
Leylin_123:mis respeto por fijar este comentario. soy sincero y dire que antes de leer una novela/fan fic, o cualquier otro trabajo yo lo primero que busco es leer todas las reseñas malas y criticas que den mala opinion, las leo y considero si son creibles, si tienen logica lo que dicen y luego leo los primeros capitulos para decidir si seguir definitivamente el trabajo o lo dejo caer.
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:I don't understand what you were saying but I totally agree with you.
hey man when will u update your novel(as a scum noble in fantasy world) plzz plzz plzz update it man to the finished if u can't at least reply man
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:I don't understand what you were saying but I totally agree with you.
hey man when will u update your novel(as a scum noble in fantasy world) plzz plzz plzz update it man to the finished if u can't at least reply man
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:I don't understand what you were saying but I totally agree with you.
hey man when will u update your novel(as a scum noble in fantasy world) plzz plzz plzz update it man to the finished if u can't at least reply man
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:Really? I know there is a lot of OG information but which parts are wrong information though? I believe that I didn't put wrong information. Yeah, I stopped reading 2ndVol1 and it has been a long time I read the LN. The fanfic is not even started and I know my writing is trash.
hey man when will u update your novel(as a scum noble in fantasy world) plzz plzz plzz update it man to the finished if u can't at least reply man
IOnlyReadNTRHentai:Really? I know there is a lot of OG information but which parts are wrong information though? I believe that I didn't put wrong information. Yeah, I stopped reading 2ndVol1 and it has been a long time I read the LN. The fanfic is not even started and I know my writing is trash.