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Review Detail of Ephode in Sold To An Alpha

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Ephode
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«First chapter spoilers. Read the review at your own risk.» I read the first chapter. First impressions? The stages of grief are portrayed accurately throughout the chapter. Leia goes through disbelief and denial when learning about the death of her mother and then enters the raging stage. Good illustration, I'd say. One thing that I'm thankful for is the lack of spelling errors or grammatical errors. All in all, I'd give this a 8.8 out of 10, based on the first chapter. So for all of you who’re wondering if this is worth it to read, I'd say based on what I've gleamed so far? Go for it! And for why I've given this a 8.8 rating, it's because of the pacing. Everything is happening so quickly, first Leia’s mother dies, she goes and gets drunk, goes into her father’s mansion and starts smashing his expensive cars. All in one chapter.

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Sold To An Alpha

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AngelLily
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thank you so much for the review ❤❤❤❤

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AngelLilyAuthorAngelLily

am sorry about that, but there was nothing else I could add there unless I want to make it draggy, unhooking, and boring. I do hope you continue reading though.❤❤❤❤