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Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Sold To An Alpha

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JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv12yrJJ_Prakoso

Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I read so far and I am sorry if it's offending you: World Building: The world-building so far it's fine for me, but it's not quite clear for now because the description is vague or not much. Therefore, I suggest to give more description about the environment and the world itself to make it more lively. Character: I do like Leia in the first few chapters that she have a motive or even a guts to stand up with her supposedly father figure which is quite cool moment. Adrik also quite interesting with his background as a werewolf and I do like how the setting up their relationship. Hence, I believe the author can give an interesting development between their relationship. Writing Quality: The flow for the writing quality is quite smooth and the character thoughts is fine I guess. Overall, it's an interesting Werewolf webnovel and a supernatural-romance fan novel could check it out this one. Keep up the good work!!

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AngelLily
AngelLilyAuthorAngelLily

thank you but here let me explain. Not all novels should world building be explained in a whole chapter as it will make it boring. Right she is just in a normal rich mansion, what am trying to say is... The more the story goes, the more the world will be explained and right now these chapters are not where chapters of world-building at needed I already know you have an idea of what type of environment she lives in. But I will try my best to improve it... Thank you for reading.

AngelLily
AngelLilyAuthorAngelLily

and it's not offending at all😇 an glad you gave me an honest review to improve it more. thank you

JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv1JJ_Prakoso

You're welcome and good luck!!