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Wallflower_Monk
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I read 10 chapters before I dropped this novel 😓. While the synopsis is interesting, the novel is not done so well. Detailed review below: • The FL randomly receives a system with an awesome power. It's really cool. Anything she reads can become a reality. So for example if she reads an article about an expensive car, she'll immediately feel car keys in her pocket and the system will tell her the car is ready to be driven in her parking space. This is limited to one item a day, but I mean, how awesome is that?! 🤩... It's too bad the system's personality is WHINEY 😑. I don't like this system. It keeps on threatening to unbind with her if she says anything bad. It's like a nagging child. Sort of takes away the awesomeness of the system. It also has no backstory. Like why did it appear? Why did it choose her? There are just not enough details given about this system. 👩🏻 The FEMALE LEAD: > She kinda sucks to be honest🤷🏽‍♀️. She's definitely not very intelligent. Or very likeable: > FL's dad is diagnosed with cancer but has no money for treatment. FL gets enough money from the system and sends it to her father. Now a normal person would go live close to their dad in this period of time ESPECIALLY SINCE she is now a millionnaire who doesn't work anymore so has a lot of free time; AND she has a system so she can get anything she wants. You know what this FL does? She decides to spend her free time going on double dates with her ex-boyfriend and his new sugar momma 🤯😖. I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND! You legit got an awesome system and are wasting your time with your ex 🤦🏽‍♀️. Her dad possibly dying is thrown into the part of her brain that doesn't work so well. From her actions so far that's a pretty big part 😒. > Honestly, the system is wasted on her. Instead of googling awesome stuff to have she resorts to magazines- not always getting what she specifically wants. 📚 I just do not like it. It's translated well enough but that's about the only good thing. A pity really. Such a great idea but not implemented well. Needs way more detail and backstory.

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