Review Detail of Agis_Z99 in Dream Training : The Champions
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It was my first English novel, so there would be a lot of flaws in it. If you think this novel readable then please continue, but if you think the English in the novel is too bad to interrupt your reading pleasure, then stop reading. English is not my mother tongue, but one of the ways to improve English is to keep writing and reading. Because it's hard for me to improve English if I have to stop writing this novel. The background of this novel is an alternate reality with references of players from the real world. I apologize if there any fan of a club or a player was offended by my writing.
Dream Training : The Champions
Agis_Z99
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There will be a romance but it's a very smooth romance rather than a dramatic one. about the cover, I'm just too lazy to make a good one. maybe I will change it in the future
Lxpsy:Hey, will there be romance cause u got a girl on the cover ? Or will our Mc be a transgender ?
I just Finished reading the novel i found that story is so outstanding and unique. I m not a native english speaker, i found that ur english writing is so Good. Please, just change the cover and please please continue don’t stop updating the novel don’t drop. Waiting for more update. Thanks for this masterpiece🔥
I love reading Football Novel but I am only proficient in Eng so my options are of limited.And the only translated one are China Ones which make MCs lead their China Team to WC Glory and I always LoLed at this part.😂😂I mean they still can't even qualify for WC.And this one is a good part from U as I thought this is sensual.
Author-san, I love the idea. I don't have a problem with orthographic, but I think the story is too fast and shallow. You focus too much one that it isn't important for the story (like half a chapter for a match that didn't have anything to do with MC). There's much potential in what you wanted to do, I just feel it needs more development, more world building.
Why did you have to add have feature of improving 5 player with MC, author? I dropped the novel after that stupid stunt. If system has such crazy power to improve skill of a player like video game why it don't use it on MC? Half of what MC improve by training in dreaming just automatically adds to 5 player... Why not it adds it to the MC instead of distributing? Stupid trash idea.
ON chapter 96 and it’s getting kinda stale & repetitive… tbh you can skip to the end of a match and realize what happened, theirs no flare or sparkle in the games anymore he isnt leveling its just match after match after match and he doesnt have any stars so I cant imagine his squad full of youths winning the league this year neef some major changes
I'm really happy for a romance with no drama, as long as it's fluffy and sweet and doesn't interfere tok much with the main plot it sounds grea
Agis_Z99:There will be a romance but it's a very smooth romance rather than a dramatic one. about the cover, I'm just too lazy to make a good one. maybe I will change it in the future
Hein_Sat:I love reading Football Novel but I am only proficient in Eng so my options are of limited.And the only translated one are China Ones which make MCs lead their China Team to WC Glory and I always LoLed at this part.😂😂I mean they still can't even qualify for WC.And this one is a good part from U as I thought this is sensual.