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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthor2yrMotivatedSloth

As the author of this novel, if I won't give it five stars, who else would? In a sense, this is a run-of-the-mill cultivation novel with a small, original twist to it. Or rather, to every aspect that might seem simple on the surface, when you will first read about it. Arrogant young master? He will act his age and status rather than throwing everything he has on the Main Character just because. If someone has high social standing, they need to know how to act the part. Female lead being a jade beauty? Yeah, but she won't start as op throwaway that MC can use to grow, but an actual partner with her own problems and a different view on the world than our dear Arthur has. OP main character oblivious to his strength? Yeah, what would a cultivation novel be without a strong lead? But being strong in a cultivation world... is a relative thing. Do you remember the saying, a frog in the well only seeing a small fragment of the sky? With the MC transmigration from an earth-like world, he won't know the basic common sense of the world. And while some of his novel-sourced knowledge will apply, some will not. Constant reset with each rank? Yeah, the ceiling for the absolute power is even higher than you can imagine (unless you read my first big novel that is *wink wink*), but it comes with its own rules and flow. TL:DR - This is a novel that's simple on the surface, but deep underneath it. The MC has its own view on the world, created by the hardships he went through in his original life, and those won't randomly disappear once he starts his new life. Yes, there will be sm*t. It wouldn't be my novel if there wouldn't be. Yes, there will be romance. I consider it an integral part of every story. Yes, there will be moments when MC will be unreasonable, will act stupid, won't be the strongest in the room, won't know anything... But how can he grow if he won't face challenges? Q/A: Q:H*rem? A: No, no and no. I'm not saying MC will only ever see a single girl, but he won't live in polyamorous relationship. Ever. Period. Q: Update rate? A: Between 1 and 5 chapters a day. I will try my best to do at least 2 a day, 3 on a good day, 4 if I'm motivated and 5 if I'm trying to prove something to myself. Q: Bonus release for power stones/golden tickets? A: I might consider it, but I won't promise anything. I have a bad history with racking up chapter debt to the readers so I would rather be cautious about it and have consistent, high update rate Q: Any perks for loyal readers? A: If I take notice on you, we might think about it. Q: Does author replies to the comments? A: Yes I do and no I don't. If a comment goes in depth about the chapter, asks valid questions, points out foreshadowing or shows readers own idea of the story, I will likely reply to them. It's a pleasure to read them and I won't leave them alone. But a comments of the "thanks for the chapter" "first" "your moma", while appreciated, won't get much of my attention. Q: What is the answer to universe? A: 44, or so the joke and google says Q: Why do you have smol pepe? A: Your momma cried out something else last night Q: Do reviews get deleted? A: If they are valid, point out problems with the story, tells your opinion, shows the readers what you like and what you dislike, then I do not touch them. But if they are 1-2-3 stars with emojis or pure insults in them, my finger won't hesitate before pressing that delete button. Q: Are you going to go premium with this novel? A: Yeah, I am. As much as some of you may hate it, in order to write as much as I do (and this isn't my only novel, mind that) I need to somehow provide for myself. Times, when my parents did that for me, are over. Q: Why 1 star your own novel? A: It's my personal protest against WN biased and useless rating system.

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One Last System

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Rairyu_Kyuketsuki
Rairyu_KyuketsukiLv1Rairyu_Kyuketsuki

I was looking for this comment... As someone who likes to understand everything that's going on, seeing the MC go from the seventh step (chap 109), to the sixth (between chap 109 and 202) then to the eighth (chap 202), the ninth and the tenth without any explanation just makes me want to insult the author and abandon the novel... Not to mention the fact that the names of the stages change... In chapter 202, the author says he's in the Core Expansion stage, but this corresponds to the third stage (the information on the first 6 stages is in chapter 109) and, as mentioned above, the author doesn't know whether he's in the seventh, sixth or eighth stage and doesn't give us any information. So, do you know if we get the missing pieces of the puzzle later?

Dark_07_Light:there is some problem here, near ch 128(when he fu**ed everyone of the skyladder sect) the system said he has now unstable foundation and in the later ch he was at the peak of 6th stage but suddenly he broke through the 9th stage and enter the 10, it was not explained when he fixed his foundation nor when he increased his cultivation nor the author described the stages. initially mc tried to full all his stats before advancing but later its like he don't care anymore and the stage where his meridians were unlocked, it was not explained just how many meridians can be unlocked in human body. only early 3 stages of his cultivation were explained but then he just skyrocketed through them while having a unstable foundation...
MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

Regarding last point - Why this review is no longer 1 star? - Because I realized that this personal protest cost this novel way too much in terms of visibility and people willingness to open it up. Sorry guys, I guess I'm a conformist after all.

Demonic_sage
Demonic_sageLv12Demonic_sage

I'm pretty sure the answer to universe is 42 according to that joke. well ive been following your novels and I must say say that you are doing a great work and keep going.

damnb_Ass
damnb_AssLv2damnb_Ass

Author, what do you mean by mc not having a polyamorous relationship but will bot see just a single girl/woman. Can you please elaborate?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

I hate to avoid using a certain word starting w h and ending arem as it would blacklist the review (Only I would be able to see it). There is the main love interest, but this novel isn't about your typical young master having easy time and easy life. I'm not so sure how their relationship will develop myself yet, so I'm giving myself an open door for potential developments in that regard in the future.

damnb_Ass:Author, what do you mean by mc not having a polyamorous relationship but will bot see just a single girl/woman. Can you please elaborate?
00_darkness_00
00_darkness_00Lv1100_darkness_00

+1 for no harem

Book_Hunter0318
Book_Hunter0318Lv4Book_Hunter0318

just a piece of advise, pls add romance to the tags if your novel indeed has. It attracts people like me and won't hesitate to read it.[img=recommend]

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

That's actually a great idea, I missed the tag back when I was setting the novel up. Thanks for the heads-up!

Book_Hunter0318:just a piece of advise, pls add romance to the tags if your novel indeed has. It attracts people like me and won't hesitate to read it.[img=recommend]
Book_Hunter0318
Book_Hunter0318Lv4Book_Hunter0318

Glad to help[img=recommend]

MotivatedSloth:That's actually a great idea, I missed the tag back when I was setting the novel up. Thanks for the heads-up!
SliverLance
SliverLanceLv4SliverLance

About the idea of not seeing just one girl...

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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

daim, because of your questions gettin autocensored, can you post a tactical dot as a other reply or in the comments? I have no problem replying but not on the phone which is currently the only way for me to do si

SliverLance:About the idea of not seeing just one girl...
SliverLance
SliverLanceLv4SliverLance

I dropped many novels cuz of it. I just want our MC to only love the FL and just don't just sleep with girls to satisfy himself ...

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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

man, you replied to the one thread thats already deleted... mc wont sleep around. But I cant say there will be a single love interest throughout the entire novel

SliverLance:I dropped many novels cuz of it. I just want our MC to only love the FL and just don't just sleep with girls to satisfy himself ...
SliverLance
SliverLanceLv4SliverLance

That's good. Well at least don't make it more than 3 love interests. And don't make us wait like JP novels to see which girl the MC will end up with like at the end of the novel or smth .. and if you wanna make it harem don't make it more than 3:5 girls, huge harems are sucks. I know that you said no harem but I said "if"... Thanks for replying to my comments, and I hope that I will enjoy your novel ... I will start reading it sometime soon.

MotivatedSloth:man, you replied to the one thread thats already deleted... mc wont sleep around. But I cant say there will be a single love interest throughout the entire novel
NewManagement
NewManagementLv5NewManagement

Why do you make the main characters idiots? Both the guy and girl are idiots. It’s annoying reading about how dumb you make your characters. Only smart people are the bad guys. But some how you let the main ones by some myrical survive(bad story). You can literally skip chapters and know what happened just by the title. had hope for this but the amount of dumb killed me at chapter 130

Filler1_Name2
Filler1_Name2Lv15Filler1_Name2

The answer is 42, not 44. It's from Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy, a really fun movie that you should check out.

Enticement
EnticementLv14Enticement

Authorr, is this more on cultivation or martial arts/murim?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthorMotivatedSloth

I would say cultivation but well, the more preconceptions about what this novel is you will have while reading it, the weirder it will turn for you. It's a cultivation novel with western-born MC and his mindset. Oh, and every trope I introduce? It's only there for me to reverse it in a sudden twist. :D

Enticement:Authorr, is this more on cultivation or martial arts/murim?
Morlex
MorlexLv12Morlex

NICE ONE[img=faceslap]

LeFraud_James23
LeFraud_James23Lv3LeFraud_James23

"Arthur" again? Please, it's way overused by now.

Tyler_Yaden
Tyler_YadenLv1Tyler_Yaden

Meh conformist is a bad way of putting it. Stepping above emotion for a logically more sensible action 👌

MotivatedSloth:Regarding last point - Why this review is no longer 1 star? - Because I realized that this personal protest cost this novel way too much in terms of visibility and people willingness to open it up. Sorry guys, I guess I'm a conformist after all.