Review Detail of Fairy_Wren in Crown From Both Worlds

Honestly I couldn’t even get through the first two chapters. This seems to be written by someone quite young so I’ll keep this short and kind. There are way too many errors in the writing. They would sometimes use the wrong word which didn’t make any sense. It seems rather juvenile overall as well. I think they should go back and edit their story, maybe find someone to check and read it through for them as well.