Review Detail of Victortoery12 in Avatar: Awakened Gamer

The fic was fine until chapter 20, from then on it seems to drop in quality? I'm not too sure how to explain it, it feels like it wasn't edited properly or that someone else wrote it. (Not the same quality as the previous chapters) A lot of unnecessary words start to appear making the dialogue a little wordy. Ex; Was that my mind playing tricks on me? (Was my mind playing tricks on me?) Up to chapter 20 was amazing, but the chat and then gatcha threw me off and made the novel less enjoyable for me. It's still a 5-star fic, I just hope the Author edits his latest chapters.