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Review Detail of Li_Yi_Wei in The Female Alpha

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Li_Yi_Wei
Li_Yi_WeiLv152yrLi_Yi_Wei

I dunno how else to ask the aurhor and I dunno if she would even respond but here it goes: This book is really good, surprisingly I enjoyed it! As someone who has seen many books from western cultures (US, etc) about werewolves, I dont really enjoy werewolves stories much because of their repetitive and boring themes or there is smth missing in those stories. But this one surprisingly made me interested! Now the reason this story does not have 5 stars is for 2 reasons: 1 is grammar errors no big deal. The main and 2nd reason is the ending. Instead of seeming open ended it just seemed rushed. As if the author needed to finish off the story but also wanted to add some last minute details. It said to continue to the chosen alpha but that doesnt make sense since that novel is a prequel so unless the author also is going to include the sequel it seemed just like a rush ending to a novel that had a lot of potential. I guess its up to the aurhor if they reply to this and explain how she wants to continue w the ending so hopefully she responds if not dont read this book if you are a person who is hoping for a closed / happy ending bc the ending is def not closed and leaves of a lot questions and just seems rushed but other than that great book!

The Female Alpha

Anna Kendra

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Anna_Kendra_2246
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Ah, yes, the dreaded cliffhanger endingšŸ˜…šŸ˜… I didn't rush the story to end, I wrote what was on my mind, but to know the sequel, you should know how it all began. Mink and Abhay have a history and they have a child together. If I just threw him in, you would be writing a review similar to 'there was no point in bringing a character in the middle of the story' or why wasn't he there at the beginning. That's why, Abhay gets to have his own screen time. The Chosen Alpha is the prequel. The Supreme Alpha, is the sequel. But that won't be published until The Chosen Alpha is done.

Penny_L
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I agree with your feedback to the autho.

Li_Yi_Wei
Li_Yi_WeiLv15Li_Yi_Wei

Ah ok bc when I first read it there was no mention of a sequel just a prequel and it didnā€™t make sense in my mind then which is why I wrote this in hopes of an explanation! Like I said it just seemed rush since there was no mention of any sequel happening and seemed like an open ended story (which personally I dislike) Iā€™ll wait for the sequel to began before reading then!

Anna_Kendra_2246:Ah, yes, the dreaded cliffhanger endingšŸ˜…šŸ˜… I didn't rush the story to end, I wrote what was on my mind, but to know the sequel, you should know how it all began. Mink and Abhay have a history and they have a child together. If I just threw him in, you would be writing a review similar to 'there was no point in bringing a character in the middle of the story' or why wasn't he there at the beginning. That's why, Abhay gets to have his own screen time. The Chosen Alpha is the prequel. The Supreme Alpha, is the sequel. But that won't be published until The Chosen Alpha is done.