Dear Author, I really really loved the story and it's execution till now(ch 176). Even though there were some cringey moments but overall story setup and internal logic was very much stable in comparison to many other nonsense stories. Though i have only one little complaint that although i love to read detailed scenes in this novel but you seem to focus a bit too much on details that it is sad to see many of chs(that too of high word count) come out as fillers đđż I mean like that arc where Setsuka comes to know about Tenku's involvement with 2 girls in Beijing was written in 3 chs while it could have been written in 1 ch at most. Same case here idol's wish to follow Tenku is spread over multiple chs but could have been shortened. So, in short there are too many irrelevant and useless details in novelđ So i hope you would improve on this factor. Lastly and most importantly I wish you would complete this story and i promise i would accompany you to end of the journey because I simply loved your story a bit too muchđ
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LIKEJust respond to this comment. Then Iâll delete it so it doesnât spoil anyone. Also is this a harem where he has more than one girlfriend/fiancĂ©e/wife?
Ayce_o_Spade:What happens to the sister? Does she show back up?
Sorry for some reason, this place for comment didn't highlight yours days ago or perhaps I was busy at that time. Anyways, I think there is clear Harem tag in story and it's true, mc will develop feelings for multiple girl partners and this becomes more apparent and crystal clear by ch252 but he won't take final step in acceptance untill his sister is found whom hasn't been mentioned at all till now except in MC's past recollections
Ayce_o_Spade:Just respond to this comment. Then Iâll delete it so it doesnât spoil anyone. Also is this a harem where he has more than one girlfriend/fiancĂ©e/wife?
Manmeet_Singh_8886:Sorry for some reason, this place for comment didn't highlight yours days ago or perhaps I was busy at that time. Anyways, I think there is clear Harem tag in story and it's true, mc will develop feelings for multiple girl partners and this becomes more apparent and crystal clear by ch252 but he won't take final step in acceptance untill his sister is found whom hasn't been mentioned at all till now except in MC's past recollections