Review Detail of ChillCultivator in The Over-Break System
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I really liked this novel. Which is actually a shock to me. I read countless novels, mainly english. (Ok, enough with me talk). Overall, the writing quality is super good, with good moments added. My grammar itself isn't good. So I don't detect any major issues from it. The only thing I have issues about is the Story Development speed. Which, might be my fault as I have read too much novels. Character Design is eh, good but feels like something is lacking. (By lacking I mean, lacking something to turn it into a Top 1 novel). The Character Design is already good enough. The rest is full stars. Overall 4.6. If you read countless novels and find it slow-pacing, I suggest you try this. Even though it is also slow-pacing, the Story, Character Design, World Background will make it worthwhile. And before people criticise me about Character Design fault. I repeat, I am comparing it to having it becoming a Top-Tier First Rank novel. It is already much better than the novels surrounding it. I would give it a 4.5 if I could.
The Over-Break System
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I appreciate the Criticism and am glad to see you enjoyed the story. To respond to your character comment, Most of vol 1 is getting to know the brothers, vol 2 is heavy on the struggles of Cynrik, as well as getting to know the Sanford, By vol 3 we have the introduction of Selene, and the climax is heavy on character deveopment for Gabby and Benny(Chapters 226-239). Pacing wise, i never wanted to blow through the tale, considering i want to flush out the whole party. Thank you for the high rating, and I hope you continue to join us in the future
I agree about pacing-wise, I have a different standard from others. But for the large majority, this should satisify them. (I am part of that majority, even though my favorite pacing is different) I honestly think my phrasing was terrible and I should have clarified. The reason behind why my criticism seem to stand out is because, I can't comment on the other parts because it's already well written. And this book is definitely worth continue reading. At least, I won't be able to find another book as good as this for a while.
ScotchTy:I appreciate the Criticism and am glad to see you enjoyed the story. To respond to your character comment, Most of vol 1 is getting to know the brothers, vol 2 is heavy on the struggles of Cynrik, as well as getting to know the Sanford, By vol 3 we have the introduction of Selene, and the climax is heavy on character deveopment for Gabby and Benny(Chapters 226-239). Pacing wise, i never wanted to blow through the tale, considering i want to flush out the whole party. Thank you for the high rating, and I hope you continue to join us in the future