Review Detail of Arid_Landscape in Through the Eyes of the Creator

This is my first novel and one that I'm writing not for the fame, but for the story. I hope you find this novel pleasurable. I'm open to any guidance, and would gladly welcome you giving me some, if any, on how to write better. However, know that, in the near future at least, I have no desire to take advice from others on the course of the novel, unless it's honest and one that I find can fall into place in my plans. Thank you.