Review Detail of GrimReeFer in Highschool DxD: A New Satan

For the first 67 chapter this story is really good, there's a few low points, (like the moka part, that was badly written) but for the most part it's written very well, it strays from cannon and does it's own thing, he's strong and makes his own kingdom and becomes a God, probably one of the top 10 dxd fanfics, sadly once you hit chapter 68 the author started forcing cannon, there were signs of it happening earlier but they were easily ignored (training ophis to be a double agent for the chaos brigade, it was a sentence or 2) it starts by forcing the original peerage for rias even tho there's 0 reason for it, then sending vali/kuroka to form the slash dog with 0 reason, its weird author spent 400k words+ not sticking to cannon only to change it later, I guess he lost his passion or something, still an amazing story up until then though, so defo give this a go.