Everything was perfect until chapter 49 when you just ruined my day. I pretty much liked the story and I know that it is very hard for you to fit the role of every character in the story but still the solution you came up with made me very disappointed in you. Still, this is your story and you can do whatever you want but the story from chapter 49 upward is not to my taste.
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