Review Detail of Chori35 in Highschool DxD: A New Satan

Chapter 50 comment. I'm lying if I say that I'm not disappointed by Moka and the dragon :"u. BUT, after your explanation and other more my critical thinking and reflecting on life and my girlfriend. I understood that it's fine until that moment and give some pretty characters to the son of the mc sounds good, don't forget mana I think that is a delicate character aahhahahaha if that ends in another character that is not the mc, many haters will surely appear in another topic the addition of these type moon characters I loved it a lot , the holes as the centuries go by I see them very well because if something doesn't add up very well go ahead you can always modify or invent something, in the future that the mc has twins wouldn't it be nice?. thanks for the chapter. it was a bittersweet taste at the beginning, however, in the end it ends very beautifully and shows the author's talent you have regarding creation and the courage to be willing to go with your position despite the negative reactions that may result from it. I loved this fan-fic I remember reading it at night and saying woah it's very extensive and it explains everything very nicely I love it and seeing that you continue with the style of explaining and you don't get too attached to the main story because you leave it as a main course add one beautiful species to history. it is your decision to be your story but something I learned from the novels of more than 1500 chapters is that maintaining the audience and essence of the mc is difficult and I know that you do not want to catch girls as pokemons because it is something very crazy, but the "dimensional gap "There's a lot of game there, right? sure you can expand it more, every story has an end but the finished canon shouldn't stop you. As the Chinese in their sayings say "you are a frog in a well, you do not know the immensity of the heavens" you have an incredible future and I look forward to seeing your evolution in the povs and if you choose a "slice of life" with some action involved or cultivation mode or something crazy like incredible wars or battles (you do them very well and lemons too ;v, although it can always improve) There are many fan-fic criticized of dxd I think it makes sense in some points and pressure can affect you but without a doubt and I think many people would agree you have already achieved your goal, create a very decent and entertaining work, if in the future you make another fan-fic or better yet a novel I will be on board that trip and hopefully from the beginning as in this one (I have studies in college and I work so I don't know how much but I will read for sure at some point and I will leave some other power stone) thanks for exist autor