Review Detail of zz0_DJChris_0zz in The Day an Asteroid Fell Into School
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I've never been more insulted but written media before. I have no idea what all you 3+ star ratings are on about. I can't believe that in the first chapter, some guy (because he still hadn't been introduced correctly told me "...how great he was..." with a smug look on it's face. This is obnoxious. I really hope the rest isn't great, because that part was so discussing, that I just bounced. Don't make your protagonist hate able in the first couple of pages.
The Day an Asteroid Fell Into School
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If you think I'm wrong, too. Just look at the (ha) number of "Readers", then the low comments, along with the votes. I'm never mean when leaving comments regarding anything, and nothing's changed here. You need to cut that before it becomes a habit that causes failure, and a loss of interest. Please.
