Decent story and I'm enjoying my time reading it so far as of chapter 10. MC's a pretty decent guy who knows when to act and when not to, so that's a plus. I like his powers as well, though a bit more explanation on his physical strength, his pyrokinesis and swordsmanship would be a nice thing to add. My only problem with the story is grammar - wrong use of 'there/their/they're' throughout the story so far, same goes for 'too/to' and 'accept/except'. If the author went through all his chaps when they have the time and sorted out these problems, the grammar would be five star worthy.
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