Overall this is likly to be one of the best marvel and xmen fanfictions on webnovel in the future. if the author continues with this novel because so far the grammer and idea have been amazing and very original. And so my advice to you auther is if someone is crazy and starts giving you criticism that is not helpful or makes you a better writer just ignore them. a lot of authors on webnovel would have done better if they had ever gotten this advice from someone.
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