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The story is a mess. Rather than having the mc become a low level master black smith and show his importance it broke world building in order in order to show off Chinese weapons. Let me explain: From where I currently left the mc is already 7th grade in terms of power as a martial artist yet still hasn't advanced to low level master blacksmith yet. And oh by the way he became important to the kingdom. An apprentice blacksmith is a slave because mortal weapons are not really useful but for the sake of power fantasy the author made it so that mortal weapons have great importance. The author also made blacksmiths above apprentice almost nonexistent just so the mc has importance, only grandmasters have appeared. In fact the higher weapons are very very rare for some reason. When assassin went to the kingdom to assassinate a high target or targets none of them had a single weapon above mortal. Like excuse me? This isn't the end of the dumbness. For some reason the enemy kingdom just so happen to make a list of all the assassins that are going to kill the targets. Killing these targets would hurt the Xia kingdom. So why would they make a note like that? And why would they entrust that note on some low level martial artists? One of those targets have a very high rank so why? To hide it? Then why would those low ranks have a band of soldiers behind them? Because of that they were discovered. Why? So the mc could do something important even if he is weak. Why would mortal weapons not break or be inefficient against martial artist? So the mc can be important. More importantly so Chinese weapons can be praised. That's right all this world breaking is so the author can praise weapons. At least that is what I think otherwise why would the author do this?

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Hey, I empathize with your position. I too tried to dive into this novel because it was trending but was disappointed . At the end of the day, this is a YA novel targeted at Chinese teens written by an amateur. If you aren't in the targeted demographic, your more likely to be critical. Also, the analytics on WebNovel are suspicious, so many readers with more mature reading preferences are duped by the rankings. BTW, this is not a take down of Legendary Armament Canon. There are very few novels/shows/movies targeted at younger, less experienced people that I can enjoy. The webnovel space overall is meant to be treated like prospecting: hours of sifting through sands in the river hoping to accumulate gold.