Review Detail of Triclaws in Xianxia: Why am I here?

Sometimes I feel like the english words I'm reading are not fully comprehensible sentences. And that's exactly what's bothering me when reading this novel. Now don't get me wrong. I can understand and read this novel just fine. But the sentence structuring feel off at times. And the overly complicated use of words to convey something simple makes it annoying to read. The author also has a tendency to jump from talking about one part to another. Swapping points of view, which makes the reading experience less fluid. All in all it's not a horrible read and I did enjoy reading about this xianxia world... However I find myself not liking the author's writing style and decided to drop the novel because of it.